Thursday 26 September 2013

Sienna's Candy World story!

I couldn't believe it, I just stared and stared.The world had turned to candy.All the rivers,wide open seas were a rich chocolate milkshake flowing or bubbling gently in itself,all the little streams were thick custard cascading into the rivers.The trunks of trees were all different kinds of liquorice twisted together,from sugary,sweet red liquorice to dark coke like black liquorice,the tree leaves were fresh green mints.Rocks had turned into fruit pastels of all fruity flavours,sizes and colour!.The paths ways became hard,crackling peppermint swirling with their usual red and white swirls.But most of all the people they had became sugary yet sour,heavenly and delicious,jelly babies!.Finally the buildings were made of warm,soft gingerbread,with candy cane doors with brass chocolate knobs, also they had the roof was made entirely of thin, squashy strawberry laces. 

1 comment:

  1. oh wow, what a great story, so descriptive, i want to eat it all up ! amazing writing

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