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A great first 100wc, Jaden - well done!I can tell you thought really hard about what you wanted to write - your next steps are to use a few more describing words (adjectives) and also to keep your writing as neat as possible.Mr K :-)
I was reading your 100wc 3 times because its realy good.Great work with a big G again im writing Great work!!!!!!!!
I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge Jaden. I wonder where your adventure with your dragon will take you next?
A great first 100wc, Jaden - well done!
ReplyDeleteI can tell you thought really hard about what you wanted to write - your next steps are to use a few more describing words (adjectives) and also to keep your writing as neat as possible.
Mr K :-)
I was reading your 100wc 3 times because its realy good.Great work with a big G again im writing Great work!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge Jaden. I wonder where your adventure with your dragon will take you next?
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