Wednesday 25 September 2013

Georgina's description of the weir!

Georgina has been thinking of ways to describe the weir on the River Severn at Castlefields:

Fierce, almighty waters crashing down into the quiet, peaceful river. The strong current pulling down whatever trespasses in it. Unknown dangers drifting in the sparkling river.

1 comment:

  1. Abi from Ash class1 October 2013 at 16:54

    I love your two pairs sentence. Keep up the good work!

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