Monday 7 October 2013

The Disappearing Disaster, by Lily B...

The Disappearing Disaster!

On Christmas Eve on Ice drop mountain, a girl called Eliza stepped out onto the Village Farm and wondered what kind of Snow Sculpture she would make the next day. Eliza was shouted in for dinner. She crunched through the icy Snow to the Farmhouse and sat down for dinner. After dinner, Eliza went into her room and looked through her fantasy story.  On the firm pages, was a picture of an ice land.  She realized it was getting late and slowly fell asleep.

The next morning, as quickly as she could, Eliza got changed and pulled on her coat and boots. She ran outside and started rolling three giant Snowballs. Eliza put them on top of each other to make a Snowman. She named the Snowman Alex. "Eliza! Auntie Molly's here!" shouted Eliza's Mum from the kitchen. She went inside and opened her presents. When her Auntie said "goodbye", Eliza went back outside but Alex wasn't there!!! She walked through the trees and found herself in a different place. Eliza realized it was the fantasy land from her storybook!

Suddenly, she saw Alex with a bunch of other Snowmen and women. Eliza guessed this was his family. "Goodbye!" shouted Eliza. Just then Alex lifted one of his stick arms and waved at Eliza. "WOW!" exclaimed Eliza. She heard her Mum's voice calling her and she walked back through the trees.
The End!

By Lily B.

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