Wednesday 9 October 2013

Adam W's 100wc - week 6...

On september the 14th 1944, there was a hot air balloon. Not a normal hot air balloon a special one.
Its was all different colors like red, blue, pink, orange, green and lime and loads of other colors.  But
this air balloon was special because of its powers it could float and could also do loads of other stuff like
teleport and go invisible. 20 years later It had been popped by a criminal when he was trying to steal it, but know one knew, so in the morning it was a surprise to see that
it was flat. It never worked again on that fateful day.No-one was able to fly in it again therefore everybody was insanely unhappy that day.The world felt like it was upside down everything was wrong the sun would not  shine anymore the moon wasn't there that night. There was a black hole because the criminal had stabbed the balloon lord that controls the moon, sun and the balloons, who was in it. and everything was sucked into that black hole except for a boy called Jack, who had super powers !.
Jack flew and teleported dodged and held lamp posts to not get sucked in. Suddenly woshhhhh!!! Jack got pulled into the black hole...

By Adam W.

2 comments:

  1. epic Adam I have nothing to say bad about it.

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  2. Hello Adam,
    Well done on entering the 100wc. My goodness what a disaster from just popping a balloon. Nothing was working, but I hope that Jack managed to save the day with his super powers.

    I did find this font quite difficult to read as it seems to be squashed together.

    Keep up the great work and entering the 100wc
    Mrs W - Team 100wc
    Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England

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