Wow, Mia, what a fabulous 100wc - and you read it so beautifully! I think my favourite line is 'four burning red eyes glinted at me' - amazing! However, I'm not sure I'm keen on my head being ripped off at the end - poor me! :-( Mr K :-)
Hello Izzy, I just love being able to read your work, whilst listening to you read it out loud. This really helps to add to the story. You read with such great expression and I loved the wolf howling! Well done Izzy. I just loved the opening sentence and the way it gripped me straight away. Is it a DE:DE sentence? Superb! Remember to include a capital letter inside speech marks Izzy, and thanks for writing such a great piece for me to read. P.S. Poor Mr Kenyon...losing his head like that :)
Wow, Mia, what a fabulous 100wc - and you read it so beautifully! I think my favourite line is 'four burning red eyes glinted at me' - amazing! However, I'm not sure I'm keen on my head being ripped off at the end - poor me! :-(
ReplyDeleteMr K :-)
Brilliant. So pleased you are writing about The Wolves Mia!! COYW - Izzy's Mum
ReplyDeleteHello Izzy, I just love being able to read your work, whilst listening to you read it out loud. This really helps to add to the story. You read with such great expression and I loved the wolf howling! Well done Izzy.
ReplyDeleteI just loved the opening sentence and the way it gripped me straight away. Is it a DE:DE sentence? Superb!
Remember to include a capital letter inside speech marks Izzy, and thanks for writing such a great piece for me to read.
P.S. Poor Mr Kenyon...losing his head like that :)
Mrs Duxbury