Once there was a young girl called Alice she was a selfish child.If she wanted a doll she would get it . Her mother and father would give her anything she wanted because they thought she wouldnt love them . So when they said her mother was having a baby Alice was livid she stomped up stars revolting . Justs then she saw her magnificent box she didnt want a baby but when she lifted the lid she heard a puppy she jumped into the box . When she landed in a pile of moldy grass . Then she saw the puppy it was a puppy Chow Chow it opened its mouth
“you should be happy for your mother !”
“why should I” but then she thought about how fun it would be then the puppy dissapeard and she was flunged back to her house she was never horrid agane
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I loved the part when she found a puppy!
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