On December 5th,1944,a man called Uini Grafhat made a phone called the Jajitii that could do loads of stuff.When there had been 1,000,000 phones sold, the talking and every noise stopped...
Everyone had became so interested with the phones that after a while not one word was said,even the police,firemen,doctors,soldiers,pilots and more stopped talking;The planes crashed the cars crashed the hoses stopped and soldiers dropped their guns.What had happened?.Everyone had frozen.Suddenly..
“Mohahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!”An evil monster had made everyone freeze...
Well done Adam, what an imaginative idea to think of - that it should be telephones that make all the noise stop! Next time remember to use spaces after punctuation marks so that your piece is nice and easy to read. Great work though.
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