Well done Nikola and Sophie, What a fabulous 100 word challenge you have both written. You have used some great description words and I can visualize being there.
Great writing girls! This is the first 100WC where I was able to listen to a piece of writing in the writer's own voice. I love the audioboo tool. My class use it a lot!
You used wonderful adjectives in your story to describe what is happening. You set the scene well by introducing the cold, windy day. Keep up the great writing!
From Mrs Natusch Team 100WC
PS - I noticed that I am your 5th visitor from NZ. Yay! ;)
Well done Nikola and Sophie, What a fabulous 100 word challenge you have both written. You have used some great description words and I can visualize being there.
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ReplyDeleteGreat writing girls! This is the first 100WC where I was able to listen to a piece of writing in the writer's own voice. I love the audioboo tool. My class use it a lot!
You used wonderful adjectives in your story to describe what is happening. You set the scene well by introducing the cold, windy day.
Keep up the great writing!
From Mrs Natusch
Team 100WC
PS - I noticed that I am your 5th visitor from NZ. Yay! ;)