This is a very moving 100WC, Isabelle. You described the scene well and used some lovely describing words. A good example of this was the word 'insufferable'. Perhaps you could use even more words like this in future to really bring your writing alive.
welldone you have made a lovely peace of work and you deserve a pat on the back.
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ruby | Year56@galleyhill.herts.uk
This is a very moving 100WC, Isabelle. You described the scene well and used some lovely describing words. A good example of this was the word 'insufferable'. Perhaps you could use even more words like this in future to really bring your writing alive.
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Nicola - Team 100WC (Durham, England)