I liked some of the strong words you used to describe the sounds of war. I also liked the diary entry style of writing. You balanced the story with your ending of remembrance. In Australia, 11th November is a very important day of Remembrance. Keep up your writing John C (100WC Team) Australia
I liked some of the strong words you used to describe the sounds of war. I also liked the diary entry style of writing. You balanced the story with your ending of remembrance. In Australia, 11th November is a very important day of Remembrance. Keep up your writing
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Australia