Great job on writing a really descriptive piece of writing incorporating this weeks prompt "… meetings were held across the country to find an answer….." I enjoyed your use of adjectives because they made me visualize and make pictures in my mind. I am glad Mr Morris was sent to jail for life for stabbing Mr K.
Wow, this is the first time I have seen someone actually retelling their 100wc! Very imaginative! Your use of adjectives is excellent, it really enables me to visualise your writing!
To Lily
ReplyDeleteGreat job on writing a really descriptive piece of writing incorporating this weeks prompt "… meetings were held across the country to find an answer….."
I enjoyed your use of adjectives because they made me visualize and make pictures in my mind.
I am glad Mr Morris was sent to jail for life for stabbing Mr K.
From Mrs Natusch
team 100WC
NZ
So am I!
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Wow, this is the first time I have seen someone actually retelling their 100wc! Very imaginative! Your use of adjectives is excellent, it really enables me to visualise your writing!
ReplyDeleteExcellent Lily
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